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June 10, 2014 / philosophermouseofthehedge

There but for the see

Winds shifted without warning.

Could be a deal breaker.

“You roar,” she whispered with despair.

“Only to secret your gentle murmurings from others.” He surged forward to reach her feet. Roughly beseeching.

It was rocky between them.

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Observers shook their heads. Staying out of it. (Though body language told otherwise.)

Each had their favorite.

Each would have to deal with the outcome.

“It’s pound, pound, pound. Over and over. You never stop.” She eluded his grasp and climbed higher.

“It’s the job. It’s who I am. But I can change.” He detoured down the gully and met her around the bend. “I can be still. I can enjoy the sunrise. I can gaze at the horizon and dream, too.”

She wanted to crumble. Fall into his embrace and drown. Ignore the storm clouds building.

Beneath her. Said firmly and true.

Misty eyed at the thought of his final wave if he turned away now.

From his depths, he offered, “Your tears feed my soul and bring all that’s good in me to life.”

Under a vast open sky, They bargained.

Only so much able to give.

A way.

There must be a way.

Strong desires burn hot. Melting what kept them apart.

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Don’t let the ship sail without hopping aboard.

Every morning now, they renew their lives together.

Her volcanic skirts flow scarlet to greet his cool blue welcome.

Playfully he leaps up softly wrapping her shoulders in the most regal of white foam.

A mountain sprite and her ocean consort.

As they say, opposites do attract and love finds a way.

Hopes and dreams born on island

Phil, the Philosopher Mouse of the Hedge.

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26 Comments

  1. katecrimmins / Jun 10 2014 5:21 pm

    You can’t fight love.

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  2. Paul / Jun 10 2014 5:28 pm

    Definitely an explosive yet oddly quenching post.

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  3. RAB / Jun 10 2014 5:29 pm

    A natural romance! Very sensuous!

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 10 2014 7:26 pm

      A contrast and compare experiment..but it took off on it’s own. It’s summer. Island time! Appreciate you floating over to chat

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  4. Roy Sexton (Reel Roy Reviews) / Jun 10 2014 5:50 pm

    this line sent chills up my spine for some reason: “You roar,” she whispered with despair.

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  5. Robin / Jun 10 2014 8:19 pm

    Love wins again. 🙂

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  6. marthaschaefer / Jun 10 2014 10:51 pm

    An Epic observation of love…

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  7. Sun / Jun 11 2014 1:01 am

    the dialogue between the lovers . . . epic! this one, a killer: “Your tears feed my soul and bring all that’s good in me to life.” excellent, Philomouse! 🙂

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 11 2014 1:15 am

      That line started the whole thing. Glad it works.
      (Trying to do the assignment for WP writing101…but it’s so hard …stories and characters just won’t go where they are directed…)
      Thanks for dancing in the rain and splashing up a comment

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  8. Sun / Jun 11 2014 1:02 am

    oh, and love the title as well!! 😛

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 11 2014 1:21 am

      Of course it goes against all the rules of choosing titles, but the phrase was quite insistent. Google Search must go nuts trying to spider crawl my writings? Thanks for enjoying the ripples.

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  9. sandylikeabeach / Jun 11 2014 2:15 pm

    Love this post, Karen! And the photos are gorgeous.

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 11 2014 2:24 pm

      Oh so many serious writers around – and that WP Writing101 deal. A little splash in those waters. Started writing a telenovela and ended up with a folk legend. You just never know. That was quite a view that day. Nice to not have any tall buildings around here blocking the skyshow. (Did you see the first on is the same scene turned sideways? It just looked a little like water reflection so it swirled around) Thanks for the kind words – hope summer’s started nicely for you. Glad you tossed a comment into the pool!

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  10. gingerfightback / Jun 11 2014 3:45 pm

    Aaaaaahhhhh…….Islands……

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  11. Abby Boid / Jun 11 2014 7:46 pm

    Very gorgeous, and very powerful. Oh, and the literal part of my brain got reminded a lot of the honeymoon to the Galapagos – volcanoes and fire and water, and all that. Loved it (this post, and the honeymoon!)

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 11 2014 8:00 pm

      Now that would really be a wonderful trip. Memories forever. (and writing fodder…names changed…) Thanks the kind words and for surfing in to chat

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  12. jannatwrites / Jun 12 2014 4:23 pm

    Beautiful – and I love the photos!

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 12 2014 4:42 pm

      Just bouncing back between verbal and visual – Sometimes one drives. Sometimes the other. Keeps it fun. Thanks for splashing over a comment

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  13. Liz Kibby / Jun 13 2014 7:51 pm

    Awesome photos!

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    • philosophermouseofthehedge / Jun 13 2014 9:08 pm

      Sometimes the picture are first – and sometimes the story. Thanks for swimming in these waters!

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